critique please

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Mike888, Sep 30, 2004.

  1. Mike888

    Mike888 TPF Noob!

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    nevermind, sorry
     
  2. 2Stupid2Duck

    2Stupid2Duck TPF Noob!

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    Um... okay. I think the post is a little short. Also, you should have used a full stop between the nevermind and the sorry.

    Apart from that, nice, brief and to the point.
     
  3. SirvoN

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    I think "n" should be capitalized. Also there should be a period at the end of the sentence. But I think the placement of the comma really makes the post (rule of thirds).
     
  4. jadin

    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    If you add some contrast I think it'd really help.
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    You're all too funny :D

    But to add some critique to this post:

    I had always thought that "Never mind" was two words... ;)
     
  6. captain-spanky

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    i always thought 'Nevermind' was Nirvana not sorry?
     
  7. Luminosity

    Luminosity No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    :lmao:
     
  8. Corry

    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    Ya know...I'm noticing you are just a tad bit odd. You fit so well here! :)
     
  9. 2Stupid2Duck

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    Why thank you.
     
  10. Osmer_Toby

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    i think the color version would be better.
     
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    Awesome album! I LOVE Nirvana...
     
  12. Mike888

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    im so very confused. lol :shock:
     

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