Critique Please

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by armstrong1118, Jan 24, 2007.

  1. armstrong1118

    armstrong1118 TPF Noob!

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    Im new to the forums and currently do photography as a hobby.

    I am looking for any type of critique on some of my pictures, so heres one of hopefully many.

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    All comments welcome.
     
  2. outdoorlover

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    I like it overall, maybe darken it up just a little
     
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    White looks a tad blown, but a lovely shot - the cat looks so comfortable.
     
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    I like your shot. You did well.

    The position of the eyes on the frame is good composition, but my own taste finds the image over-cropped. I like how the axis of the eyes is a diagonal line.

    This image had the possibility for a 'Triangle' composition. Triangle comps are rarely used since the 'rule-of-thirds' is the generally accepted composition.

    Here's How I got there..... If the crop had placed the chin lower in the corner and the cat's right ear kissing the left border, and the left ear kissing the top border, the comp would have been a definitive triangle composition.
     

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