does anyone else like this besides me

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  1. JonMikal

    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    nothing seems to fit, but i like the dividing line. whatcha think?

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    I do like it. Could be part of a series "windows"
    The division is too centered, but the contrast of shapes and colors is nice.
     
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    I agree with Sergiozal it seems too centered, it almost looks like two seperate photos. maybe if you tried croping some off the right, leaving just one row of panes.
     
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    i literally thought those were two seperate photos at first. i like how it is centered though. very unique shot...
     
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    I kind of like this. It is like two seperate photos but with that hinge in the center it brings them together. I think it's a little bit crooked, though.
     
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    Classic location. Good looking out. I would try again when the light is softer and more directional.
     
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    Not too bad...I think that the white frame is a little distracting though. Maybe changing the color of it?. All in all, good photograph
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Personally, I find the "is-this-one-or-are-these-two-photos"-effect quite interesting, therefore I am quite happy about the dividing line right through the centre. Makes you look twice - that alone is more than many photos get - two looks. And then there are all those different lines, ensuring a third and fourth look. Then the colours - not many, but some (rust on the hinge!) and the reflections in the windows - fifth and sixth look. What more can a photo do?
     
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    wut about putting a border around it? i def thought they were 2 seperate photos.
     
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    I Like it just the way it is....

    hey Jon - do you run your D70 at 0EV or set it at a + or - value and leave it there?

    you're exposures always seem spot on...
     
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    I think it's too centered. I'd like to see the middle dividing line move over one way or the other.
     

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