Does this shot work for you?

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  1. Bobman

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    Comments, please....Thank you.

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    Personally I'd say it's a tiny bit too bright.

    Otherwise perfect!
     
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    yep, too bright for me too -;)
     
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    to me... i can't see if you are trying to do a silouette or not.. the detail on the face is all gone... yet you can make out some of the light on the right side. just my opinion.
     
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    It's not so much that's it's too bright to me, but it seems kinda washed out. Like seeing through some white mesh filter or something. I think this might be fixed by setting a black point using the curves function in photoshop.


    Daniel
     
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    I think it needs more contrast.
     
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    Bobman, It's interresting to watch you develop. This one isn't your best, but I'm impressed with your experimental nature.

    I think Art is more effort than talent
     
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    Amen to that. I'm glad someone realizes it. I think it has a lot to do with creativity and concepts too.

    Bobman, it lacks colour... Too much bright white.
     
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    Bobman, notice how this specific pose enhances the shape of her nose.

    This is an angle I try to use as much as possible when I'm shooting my wife a/c she has a prominent nose and the wrong pose or the wrong angle is devistating not to mention unflattering.
     
  10. Bobman

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    Thank you all esp to canonrebel and photong. Will redo this concept again and I know what is missing. Damn, why never think of that on that day. " :)
     

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