Does this shot work for you?

[Bobman]

Comments, please....Thank you.

 

[Dandy-Warhol]

Personally I'd say it's a tiny bit too bright.

Otherwise perfect!

 

[anua]

yep, too bright for me too -

 

[cypilk]

to me... i can't see if you are trying to do a silouette or not.. the detail on the face is all gone... yet you can make out some of the light on the right side. just my opinion.

 

[DanielK]

It's not so much that's it's too bright to me, but it seems kinda washed out. Like seeing through some white mesh filter or something. I think this might be fixed by setting a black point using the curves function in photoshop.


Daniel

 

[Geronimo]

I think it needs more contrast.

 

[canonrebel]

Bobman, It's interresting to watch you develop. This one isn't your best, but I'm impressed with your experimental nature.

I think Art is more effort than talent

 

[photong]

I think Art is more effort than talent

Amen to that. I'm glad someone realizes it. I think it has a lot to do with creativity and concepts too.

Bobman, it lacks colour... Too much bright white.

 

[canonrebel]

Bobman, notice how this specific pose enhances the shape of her nose.

This is an angle I try to use as much as possible when I'm shooting my wife a/c she has a prominent nose and the wrong pose or the wrong angle is devistating not to mention unflattering.

 

[Bobman]

Thank you all esp to canonrebel and photong. Will redo this concept again and I know what is missing. Damn, why never think of that on that day. "