Does this shot work for you?

Comments, please....Thank you.

 

Personally I'd say it's a tiny bit too bright.

Otherwise perfect!

 

yep, too bright for me too -

 

to me... i can't see if you are trying to do a silouette or not.. the detail on the face is all gone... yet you can make out some of the light on the right side. just my opinion.

 

It's not so much that's it's too bright to me, but it seems kinda washed out. Like seeing through some white mesh filter or something. I think this might be fixed by setting a black point using the curves function in photoshop.


Daniel

 

I think it needs more contrast.

 

Bobman, It's interresting to watch you develop. This one isn't your best, but I'm impressed with your experimental nature.

I think Art is more effort than talent

 

Amen to that. I'm glad someone realizes it. I think it has a lot to do with creativity and concepts too.

Bobman, it lacks colour... Too much bright white.

 

Bobman, notice how this specific pose enhances the shape of her nose.

This is an angle I try to use as much as possible when I'm shooting my wife a/c she has a prominent nose and the wrong pose or the wrong angle is devistating not to mention unflattering.

 

Thank you all esp to canonrebel and photong. Will redo this concept again and I know what is missing. Damn, why never think of that on that day. "