Drex's Poetry

AgentDrex · Dec 10, 2012

Just a few of my short poems. Nothing great and nothing worth publishing anywhere else so perhaps someone here will enjoy them.

Let Me Out How did you do that? I have to ask. You talk about the future, By bringing up the past. Don't you know? It's over and done. What's dead is dead, Why bring it up? I was a loser, You told me so. Now you tell me to stay, When I want to go. I've come to terms, With our loss. I'm leaving now, Since the arguing won't stop. Don't get in my way, Please shut your mouth. Open the door, And let me out.
Lipstick Scarred Lipstick scarred Memories of her Dust cloud following closely Behind her as she leaves Me for another town Another face Another dollar A different place Can't seem to drink Her off my mind So clouded with lust Left here wanting Her back in my arms So weak with desire Of her breath Down my neck Her hands on my chest Sinking with depression Hopelessness She's gone I don't go on To end happily
The Hundred Year Old Tree from the time I was planted in the ground by a young boy upon a small mound I've watched things grow and then fall down I was there when the boy had grew took over the farm at age twenty-two did all the farming that he could do when the bank came to seize the property the old man left to a bigger city while I was left behind indefinitely machines that rumbled and scared me to death didn't cut me down like I had bet a mall will surround me 'til my last breath

DannyLewis · Dec 15, 2012

Cool man, I used to write when I lived outside I posted one here a few minutes ago... I enjoy stuff like this

AgentDrex · Dec 15, 2012

Well, thank you much for reading. I hear ya about the homelessness. Spent my fair share of it myself. Age 16 - 25 couch hopping, snow banks, bridges, homeless shelter. Northern Minnesota is not the best of places to be homeless. Looking at the possibility of that happening again. Things have gone downhill again in my life but apparently I needed the challenge for some reason. Rather do this in Belize if I had the choice.

terri · Dec 16, 2012

I liked all of them.

Nice job. I hope you keep writing!

AgentDrex · Dec 16, 2012

Thank you for the kind comment. I will need to keep writing if I want to get better. I'm no Robert Frost. Nor do I really need to be I guess. I have my own style but I haven't refined it yet. These are the ones I could post here. My real stuff is dark and disturbing at times.

terri · Dec 16, 2012

AgentDrex said:
Thank you for the kind comment. I will need to keep writing if I want to get better. I'm no Robert Frost. Nor do I really need to be I guess. I have my own style but I haven't refined it yet. These are the ones I could post here. My real stuff is dark and disturbing at times.

Sounds intriguing. It's probably more real to you and maybe even better!

It's when we think we must self-censor or second-guess ourselves that we become in danger of losing focus of our intent. Posting on an internet forum...? that may be a good thing, but for our real work, it's deadly.