E Session

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by Deadeye008, Jul 7, 2008.

  1. Deadeye008

    Deadeye008 TPF Noob!

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  2. tirediron

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    1. A nice pose, but a little too centred for my taste. Additionally, the highlights are a little strong, as is the contrast.
    2. Again, nice pose/composition, but over done in the saturation and contrast.
    3. Nice; this is one I haven't seen before. I like the idea. It would be nice if the bright area upper-right could be toned down somewhat.
    4. As per 2
    5, 6. Not fond of the sepia-esque treatment. I think these might be better rendered as either full colour or B&W.
    7. Very nice, but I think a bit of a crop off of the bottom would help.
     
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    I think you did a really nice job...

    For me the one that sticks out from this session is #6...the angle is perfect..

    You get a full feel for her expression and still can make out the smile on his face...

    I would like to see #1 in color because the lines feel a little harsh and the subjects blend with the background.

    I think #2 ..you caught a great moment but the subjects again are blending with the background - maybe a closer crop and more light on your subjects?

    I also agree #7 needs tighter crop.
     
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    Nice images overall, but I do have to agree with the over saturation and contrast, or possible over sharpening on those. Nice work.
     

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