Finally got a Scanner

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  1. thinkricky

    thinkricky TPF Noob!

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    Photos I took while in the Hospital. Feel free to C&C. The pictures themselves are a lot sharper with less noise. I'm using film. I think the poor quality is a combination of the scanner and photobucket quality. Not sure if I should post with such bad quality.

    No photoshop edits on them yet. Just strictly photographs. Let me know what you think.

    Couple questions:

    1. What could I have done to improved these photos (w/o photoshop)?
    2. How can I improve these shots w/ photoshop?


    1. Hallway
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    2. NICU
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    3. Hard to Breath
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    4. Recovery
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    5. Saying Hi
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    6. Saying Goodbye
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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    A very powerful and well executed series, especially given the conditions. Well done! The only thing I would suggest as a correction is to correct the colour castes. #2 has distinct gree caste, #4 a blue, and #5 green-blue (due I assume to the various lighting sources). I think I would prefer to see #s 3 & 6 as colour rather than monochrome. Esp #6 tends to give me the feeling that something bad has happened, when in fact it's a happy ending.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.
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  3. ANDS!

    ANDS! No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    No, color correction is what I would suggest as well - although I wouldnt revert the last one back to color. Just works for me.
     
  4. thinkricky

    thinkricky TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the input.

    I can definitely see where it can be improved. I'll work on it.

    Thanks again.
     
  5. thinkricky

    thinkricky TPF Noob!

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    My attempt to fix the colors:


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