First dusk

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Starkast, Jun 29, 2009.

  1. Starkast

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  2. Dylan-Fishman

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    Don't really see a focal point... I would move the horizon down some just so you have a 1/3 land 2/3 sky thing going on. I just don't know what I'm supposed to be looking at.
     
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    A quick gimp.
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    Crop & color change makes it look a lot better IMHO
     
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    i like the first better and i would love it if you set up like two flashes on the railroad to light it up more. but i like it
     
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    I'd like the foreground clarified/lightened esp. the woods to the left.
     
  6. Starkast

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    Thanx for the replies guys. Dylan-Fishman thanx for the effort i think the colours now looks mysterious.

    The trees on the left indeed need brighting.
     

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