First Maternity Shoot (C&C)

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  1. scorpion_tyr

    scorpion_tyr No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Six shots from my first maternity shoot, just wanted some good C&C from you guys.

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    #1 looks to be a hair underexposed, I like it except you gave her a little hair cut.
    #2 I see flash fired, but the left side of her face has some scattered shadows.
    #3 I really like the composition of 3, sky is blows out though, and I would try to remove the lines on her forehead, nice focus on her eyes.
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    #4 Nice, the sun on the top left of her head is a little distracting,.
    #5 I like 5, very nice. Very well exposed.
    #6 Excellent, great capture, whose idea was this?

    Good job on these, she has beautiful eyes, those catchlights look great in them.
     
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    All beautiful photos IMO. Number 5 winner!
     
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    scorpion_tyr No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Yes, unfortunately the location was VERY cluttered. I cropped as openly as I could, but any higher would have put some pretty distracting colors and objects in that were too big to edit out.


    Thanks, I guess the credit for the pose would have to go to her, the image quality itself is a little bit of skill and a lot of luck, and the horses in the background was just something that happened and we took advantage of it.
     
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    I screwed up my numbering! I skipped #4, let me go correct it! It was 6 that I really liked, not 5....not that there is anything wrong with 5 either, but I like 6. lol
     
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    ohhh I like them all but if I had to say something I would say less photoshop on the eyes, they almost look like glam toddler eyes.

    And the first pic, great pic, but I would have not used the belt
     
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    Ha ha... That was just something that kind of happened and we both went with it. One of my favorite shots from the whole shoot as well.
     
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    It definately worked, its a keeper. I am sure she loved it if she has seen them.
     
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    She has seen 3 of these and 1 other that I didn't include here for sure. Hopefully she saw the rest today. Had to mail the DVD to her because she lives a little too far to drive just to deliver it.

    Her exact words were "they're perfect!" for the ones she did see :D
     
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    Maybe next time you could go for a sightly larger size, like say 2560 pixels on the long side.
     
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    I would also say for the horse shot to photoshop the gunk out of the eye and nose.... When I did click on it to make it larger I wanted to throw up looking at the eye boogers. It took away from the wonderful shot!
    Just something maybe to get the picture looking amazing!
     
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    I really like number 6.
     

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