First Model Shoot

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  1. gian133

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    hey everyone.
    i had the chance to take a class and shoot it a studio with a model. it was a lot of fun. here are some of the best shots i got. let me know what you think. i posted it in the beginner section and got nothing lol
    thanks

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  2. tiffjense

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    I think the first one and the third are my favorites. I really like the use of light in the third.

    Whenever I do photo shoots with a model, I like to make sure the focus is on the face. Even if you don't fully show the face, as you have done in the last shot, I would like to have seen more definition at least (so you could make out the features).

    Hopefully you get more feedback, good job, keep shooting!!
     
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    2,3,4 are great....
    2nd pose
    3rd bw
    4th pose plus mysterical lighting.
     
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    First photo is the best. The others need work.
     

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