First photoshoot! :)

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  1. Capture_Photography

    Capture_Photography TPF Noob!

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    Check it out :)

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    it will help if you UPLOAD the images...
     
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    Cool gear of the model.
    However all of them are over processed and blown out. You'll need to tone that down a lot more.
     
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    Agreed; tone-down the processing. Also, vignetting is not always your friend (in fact, I think it very, very rarely is; framing first, then vignetting). Because of the position ofthe model's face, the vignetting in the fourth frame really detracts from it.
     
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    okay now you uplaoded them =]

    The vignette doesnt work at all in the 4th image, it makes me look at the corner instead of the model also your method of PP is, unique but bad in my opinion, the loss of contrast doesn't work too well
     
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    Clone out the door stop thingy in the last one.
     

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