First successful shoot

[tomi]

Simply taken towards sunlight on a peace of paper. No editing made.
Some comments would be nice

http://www.geocities.com/tohaapaa/Valokuvat/123_2338.JPG

 

[iSellJerseyShore]

Maybe take away from the sun to book color/contrast a bit??






-iSellJerseyShore

 

[tomi]

Sorry but I'm not sure what do you mean by booking. My english is not so good especially in some specific field as photo shooting. So I'm not aware of the terms you guys use while talking editing or something like that.

Do you think I should increase contrast or decrease ?
I prefer it natural but I have made one edited version of it:

 

[ferny]

I think you'd be better off posting something like this in the critique forum. If you're new and want help and advice, that's the place to go. Just try to include as much info as you can. Like what you wanted to do when you took the shot. Becasue it's in this forum I don't want to comment too much. I've no idea what you were after.

Welcome to the forum.