Flower Photo

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  1. PhilGarber

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    Hey all,

    This is my best photograph. Please rate it on a scale of 1/10 (1 being worst). Also, should I do some retouching to remove the dust specs? Please tell me what I did right along with what I did wrong.

    Thanks,

    Phil,
     

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    Thanks man! What'dya think? Neat site, right?
     
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    anyone else?
     
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    Following the tracker thread links.

    Pretty cool man! I like it!
     
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    I'd give it a 2.

    Starting @10:
    -5 points because it's mostly just another photo of a flower.
    -3 points because the lack of fine detail isn't working for me.
    -2 points for the stock composition.
    +1 point because it's in focus.
    +1 point because it's kind of interesting-looking.
     
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    Thanks Bifurcator! I thought the Tracker Thread was a good idea! Thanks too Alpha! All feedback, good and constructive always helps!
     
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    the resolution is pretty low, so if its sharp i cant experience it properly.. Compositionally i give it a 4 :)
     
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    Let's see.... I'll give it a 6. There are some blown highlights. But it has a modern, almost abstract, feel to it. I could see it enlarged a lot and hanging on a wall with modern decor.
     
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    Thanks man! It is:mrgreen:;)! (on my wall)
     

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