friend's headshots

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  1. Josiah

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    Hey I was asked by a friend to do some headshots for her for an audition she's going to be doing. I just wanted to know what you guys think of these, this is my third subject for portraits ever so i'm still learning. C&C very much appreciated!

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    I'm not sure if i really like thise last one, I wish there was a bit more contrast. Anyways, enjoy!
     
  2. Alexandra

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    i think these are neat!
    The first on is my favorite, but all three of them are very well done :D
     
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    I love the composition and pose of #1, but the focus is off...it appears to be on her necklace? #2 the left side of her face is a bit hot, but maybe that happened in your conversion? #3 I just don't think it's a very flattering angle for her.
     
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    I also like #1 a lot. It's a very flattering pose for her. I agree with Dawn about #2, her mouth looks sort of awkward in that one. Actually, I think her facial expression in #3 just isn't working for her. But, I like the composition!
     
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    ty for the crits:) and yeah, focus is always an issue, i have a canon S2 IS and sometimes it has problem adjusting the autofocus correctly:S 1 is definitely my favorite though.
     
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    Number two I think is my fav. Nice work!
     

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