Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by psal05, Nov 22, 2004.
whoooo the pretty colours or colors for our american friends.
nice colors but this looks more like a snapshot than anything else...
try to make the horizon more even and focus on one part of the fun house
Thanks for advice i meant to tidy it up but being lazy and just joining the forum just wanted to test i was doing everything right.
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