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  1. shuttered

    shuttered TPF Noob!

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    first post in this gallery but i'm willing to take all kinds of criticism. but ultimately i would like your opinion on which photo is better.

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  2. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    I like the first one better because it doesn't seem as busy. The only thing I am having trouble with is, it seems a little soft on the silhouette(sp). I have been known to be a little crazy though.
     
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    the pics are a little to dark for me.

    the water sparkle which can be seen on the second shot better are really nice.

    the lense glare is good also.
     
  4. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    sorry for this kind of question but... what are those white spots in the centre? Is it a scan dissadvantage? At the beginning I thought that those are sparkles but I don't think so now :p
     
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    i like the second pic better, but both seem to be a little too soft focus...
     
  6. shuttered

    shuttered TPF Noob!

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    the white spots are water sparkle, and my scanner is old and not of good grade. but the pictures look better in person
     

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