Geronimo (trying what you said)

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  1. DallasTT

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    Its ealry before I start getting ready for work. I figured I would give what you said a try. Im not sure if I got it right. But I think it looks better than my others.

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    bump:(
     
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    What were you attempting? Long exposure?
     
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    Just making shot look better
     
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    Well, if you were looking for critique maybe you should have posted it in the critique section of the forum.
    I would have to say that it's pretty good... on the far right there is something in the frame.
    Also, I think there is too much dead space to the right of the watch.

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    Where is the original shot? We might be able to comment better if you included that. And if you want to get Geronimo's attention, you might want to PM him...he can occasionally disappear for weeks at a time. :)
     
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    That is about as original as it gets other than a lil level ajustment.
     
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    I think that looks nice. A lot better then if it was centered in my opinion. Also, not to over load you with my personal suggestions, but don't be afraid to crop to. On this one, I might crop the bottom a bit, just before the tile gets in focus.
     
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    I don't mind at all. I really like to know all the things I can do to improve. Most I was able to do was play with Craigs D70
     

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