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  1. djomlas

    djomlas TPF Noob!

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    took this picture on the train, it was very crowded so limited space, a little bit of post processing, sharpening, grainy, black and white, and here it is...

    taken between different rail guards and stuff on the train that you can hold on to

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  2. Gormenghast

    Gormenghast TPF Noob!

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    It's a really nice shot, but I think it would be better if you cropped out the obstructions from the top and right. We can't tell what they are, so they're just distracting.
     
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    Yeah they are KIND OF distracting, but I still think the shot is stellar and just has TONS of emotion to it. I think its a great shot! :)

    (I may be a little biased, I work with the elderly, and have a fond respect for them) :mrgreen:
     
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    Nice capture on a very dramatic expression. I beleive cropping the picture to remove that bar would not affect its beauty.
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Very strong photo - well done here.
    The presence of the two bars (mostly so the horizontal one through his head) is debateable, they neither help nor distract and I feel that the face as such and its lines and expression are so strong, this photo will work always.
     

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