Goodnight Kiss

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  1. Becky

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    Thanks for looking, comments appreciated!! :blushing:
     
  2. Matty-Bass

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    Nice shot! I think it could use a bit more crop and lighting. I know why a dark sillohuette is nice, but the background is a little dark and doesnt contrast enough for me. If you could lighten it enough to contrast but keep the sillohuettes and crop the edges a bit more, it'd be spot on. Nice capture!
     
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    Nice shot I agree on the cropping ... and the title wasn't what I expected.
     
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    Always expect the unexpected :) Nice shot..i personally like the lighting as it is!
     
  5. Becky

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    Thanks I'll take that on board and see what I can do!
     
  6. scoob

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    i also like the lighting, the dark is nice. great shot!! :thumbup:
     
  7. Becky

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    Slightly updated version anyhow, cropped more and sky lightened to increase contrast...

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  8. Becky

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    Thanks Scoob! ;)
     
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    I like both actually .... the copping helped a bit ... well done .. like it .
     
  10. Becky

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    Cheers, thanks for the advice too... I sometimes forget the little things that really help!
     
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    I love this Becky!! Great job! : )
     
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    Arch Damn You! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think the new version is better, but saying that its what you capture with your camera that really counts - and you got a great shot here :thumbup:
     

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