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  1. Alpha

    Alpha Troll Extraordinaire

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    [​IMG]

    Shot on Foma 100. Printed on Ektalure G and gold-toned.
     
  2. abraxas

    abraxas No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Looks good Max. I need to try more B&W.
     
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    I love the picture. I like how it drags you in.

    The only thing I don't like is the area on the right. Looks like a hotspot to me. But Im not a pro.. this is my ametuer opinion.

    All and all.. I really like the picture.
     
  4. Alpha

    Alpha Troll Extraordinaire

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    Could somebody move this to B&W, please?
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    At your service, sir!

    I can - and did. :biggrin:

    And like this photo!
    I see the "blown" area on the right, too, same as Dianah, but I know too little about darkroom work and processing film to say much about it.
     
  6. nealjpage

    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    I concur (word of the day calender) with zendi--the blown area on the right's distracting, but I'm willing to bet it's part of the scan. Nice work, Max! Did you shoot this with your 4x5?
     
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    Very nicely done!!! :thumbup:
     
  8. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    I think a vertical framing would have emphasized the pathway through the grove more, and also eliminated the hotspot. Beautiful tones. I'm sure the print glows.
     
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    well there's a good range of tones, but it looks quite soft all the way through the image to me and the blown area really pulls the eye away. I agree with Digital Matt a vertical comp would have avoided that.....maybe the softness is due to scanning?
     
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    zendianah TPF Noob!

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    oh. I also think the contrast is VERY nice Max!
     
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    Hi!

    Nice dept of field in this one!
    The overexposed part to the right is not quite distracting enough for me to be bothered about it! ;) (which is the first time)

    I would choose for a different border though, this black one is way too heavy.

    gr,
    Roger
     
  12. Bobby Ironsights

    Bobby Ironsights TPF Noob!

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    WHAT THE HELL!!!

    GOLD TONED on Ektalure FRIGGN' G???

    I'd really like to see, scratch that, HAVE a print of this.

    I've heard old timers say, "When Kodak dropped Ektalure, I dropped Kodak"

    Also, I'm reading complaints about the "blown out highlights, on this print"
    I'd like to remark on that.

    ***note to pixelographers, when you see a nice digi-pic onscreen, you know that a print will almost always be slightly disappointing, right? How it doesn't quite "pop" like it did onscreen.

    Well, it's much the same but opposite with optically produced prints in a chemical darkroom. You take a print that glows from within, think to yourself, "I can't wait to show this off online:mrgreen:!"

    So you slap it on your flatbed, scan it, then take one look at how flat and lifeless it now looks and think..."Oh well...never mind":grumpy:.

    The only good scans of prints use drum scanners that wet mount the print, and the only way to use one of those is to either be rich, or send it away to get it scanned, so you can put it up on your website to sell prints. most amateurs need not apply, because of cost.

    What I'm trying to say, in my roundabout way, is that you really only get a taste, usually, from a scan of a print. You only get the composition. Upscale it in your mind, and remember that the blacks will show detail, and the whites will usually show detail on the print, that doesn't exist on the scan.***

    Example, this is one of the better people pic's I took. I just happened across this couple, in the evening, as light was fading, on an overcast day.

    On this print, you can actually see this man's fine white hairs on his head. ALL of them.
    Here is a bit of the best scan I could take.
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    Notice that it just turns into a white blob.

    So, since you can see some detail in the scan, you should definitely expect significant highlight detail in the actual print.
     

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