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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by CLOIN1, Apr 9, 2007.

  1. CLOIN1

    CLOIN1 TPF Noob!

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    Taken at Godshill on the Isle of Wight. My first submission. Opinions please.[​IMG]
     
  2. BoblyBill

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    If you can take off the date that would make a huge difference to this shot. It seems to me to be just a little titled as well, but other than that I really like this shot. The brick leads you through the shot nicely. Well composed.
     
  3. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome to the forum.

    I like the composition and the colors. The path leads the viewer into the image.

    It feels like it's tilted to the left...and that date stamp is terrible.
     
  4. CLOIN1

    CLOIN1 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the comments so far, especially about the date stamp, that has been taken on board for the future.

    Cloin1
     
  5. MonteMama

    MonteMama Calmer than you, Dude.

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    I love the comp and colors but yeah, that date stamp is a bit of a smack in the face.
     
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    Maybe cropping of the sides would help the photo....
     
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    You can straighten it in photoshop...though I think you'll inevitably have to do some cropping to make it work.

    Also, where do you live? We only have 12 months in Alabama.
     
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    My thanks to you all for your comments. To AUZambo, you ask where I'm from, is it because of the way the English express the date, Date/Month/Year, as opposed to the American way of putting the Month/Date/Year. I hope this clarifies it for you.
     

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