Gypsy caravans

CLOIN1 · Apr 9, 2007

Taken at Godshill on the Isle of Wight. My first submission. Opinions please.

BoblyBill · Apr 9, 2007

If you can take off the date that would make a huge difference to this shot. It seems to me to be just a little titled as well, but other than that I really like this shot. The brick leads you through the shot nicely. Well composed.

Big Mike · Apr 9, 2007

Welcome to the forum.

I like the composition and the colors. The path leads the viewer into the image.

It feels like it's tilted to the left...and that date stamp is terrible.

CLOIN1 · Apr 9, 2007

Thanks for the comments so far, especially about the date stamp, that has been taken on board for the future.

Cloin1

MonteMama · Apr 11, 2007

I love the comp and colors but yeah, that date stamp is a bit of a smack in the face.

loser101 · Apr 11, 2007

Maybe cropping of the sides would help the photo....

AUZambo · Apr 11, 2007

You can straighten it in photoshop...though I think you'll inevitably have to do some cropping to make it work.

Also, where do you live? We only have 12 months in Alabama.

CLOIN1 · Apr 13, 2007

My thanks to you all for your comments. To AUZambo, you ask where I'm from, is it because of the way the English express the date, Date/Month/Year, as opposed to the American way of putting the Month/Date/Year. I hope this clarifies it for you.