I Think I Forgot Something... C&C Please

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  1. sA x sKy

    sA x sKy TPF Noob!

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    [​IMG]

    Nikon D60 with 55mm f/1.4
    1/125 sec
    Aperture Priority
    f/1.4
    ISO 100

    PS: The thread title is the name of the picture lol. Just thought you guys should know.
     
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    Oh. Oh! I thought the chairs were the point of the image; didn't get it. The sandal is obfuscated by the chairs. Might have been more punchy to turn the chairs around.
     
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    I thought the same thing... Try positioning the sandal elsewhere.
     
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    I have to disagree with both of you. I didn't need for it to be obvious.
    I really like the tones in this image. Did you make it B&W in post, or in camera? Did you do any fooling around with levels, or is this straight up?

    I think it's a nice little image myself.

    The worst I could say, is you clipped a chair leg on the right side.
     
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    Hahah thanks. Yeah, I used the Nik Silver Efex Pro plugin and played around with the presets. I had to clone part of the image a bit actually. This is the original: [​IMG]
     
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    Nice post work!
    I see now, from the original, maybe getting the molding level would have been nice.
    But I love how the wall looks so much older and "worn" in your first pic.
     

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