Industrial area

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  1. Ender

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    This was taken in a city where they used to have coal mines. I have tried to make the colors dark to show the industrial feeling that this area can bring.
    The First one has been a bit inspired by the Pink floyd cover "Animal".
     
  2. ~Stella~

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    Very nice!
     
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    yes, very clean.
     
  4. seemoo

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    I love the second one. Great composition.. I would just bring back the blue in the sky a tiny bit more...
    Not a huge fan of selective coloring...

    Great shot tho!
     
  5. Ender

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    Some people already told me that they dont like the grey sky, and some others some to like it, matter of taste, and I made both version at home :)
    On both of those pictures there are a lot of selective coloring and a lot of local contrast.
    As for the grey sky, my point was to make it looks dirtier.
    But thanks Seemoo because I really like those types of comments, they help to learn and to increase your technic.
     
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    I really like your first shot the best. Great color and composition.

    I don't know if it is me, but your second shot is missing some information or seems to be corrupted. Hopefully it is not my computer... :(

    Great job on the photos!
     
  7. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Can we see the other version of Photo 2 with the sky in colour? Please?
    I am still quite much debating with myself if I like the grey sky.
    I feel I don't quite as much. Not with the building retaining its colours.
    Have you ever worked on an overall partially desaturated version (I tried that some time ago with a bit of industry photography, let's see if I can unearth that thread ... ah yes, here_it_is )? Somehow these two remind me of my own from last summer ;).
     

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