Is this a save?

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  1. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I'm still trying with PP skills.

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    Any good?

    Thanks for looking.
     
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    I like everything about the after except for the vignetting. Think it would look better if there were less of it and if it were black instead of gray.
     
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    Same here, the vignetting is too much, other than that it looks fine.
     
  4. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Thanks for the comments. I wasn't pleased with the vignetting, but after reading something Arch had instructed in another thread, I thought I'd give it a whirl. I'll try again.
     
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    Slavery is illegal, don't be so backward!

    Oh and nice edit, everything about is it better other than the vingetting.
     
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    It's a good save... I agree about the vignetting. Neat building btw
     
  7. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    2) Para los modeleos cuardrado, posicione la placa de la pared contra la pared y correr los alambres por de medio del abujero centrado. Para el modelo horizontal y el vertical, posicione la placa de base contra la pared y pase los alambres atraves de las dos aberturas ubicadas abajo de los terminales de los alambres.

    That ^^ is staying on topic as much as your comment. However, you may wish to visit this thread.

    Thanks for looking.
     
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    Es un bueno redacta pero concuerdo acerca del vignetting.
     
  9. kundalini

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    Cheers..... I will redo the vignetting maƱana
     
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    I agree with the general consensus that it looks good except for the vignetting. It looks like you just brushed some grey around the corners.
    I think it would look better if you darkened the corners rather that just put a color over it. If you're using photoshop this can easily be down by creating a new layer and setting the blend mode to soft light, then brushing over the corners with black. You can adjust the opacity to suit your preference.

    Hope that helps!
     
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    I think that I would just not do any vigneting at all. If you don't like your corners just crop them... I think i would just crop out the bottom part of the picture right about where the shadow of the telephone pull is.
     
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    building is cool..fix vignetting and bring some more contrast yet out of the building...try to pop it harder and a black and white to see maybe what i tlooks like
     

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