Double H
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- Joined
- Nov 12, 2007
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Bennielou, I am going to give you some honest, objective feedback...
I see some decent shots, but overall I was hoping for more sizzle, not just a steak. First I'll comment on several details often overlooked when framing a shot. Never cut off the bride's dress. Your white balance varies from one shot to the next, mainly in the outdoor stairs shots. In a few, the bride's skin was over processed (too soft). To me, many seem more like snapshots; flash was too direct, harsh shadows behind subjects. Several are difficult to tell exactly what your subject is. You have some good ideas like the Mr. and Mrs signs, I like it. Have you considered getting the flash totally off the camera, as in a few speedlights around the room, bouncing, remotely fired, etc.? Or even an assistant holding a light to upper right frame, etc.?
All in all, I've seen much better stuff from you in the past.
I see some decent shots, but overall I was hoping for more sizzle, not just a steak. First I'll comment on several details often overlooked when framing a shot. Never cut off the bride's dress. Your white balance varies from one shot to the next, mainly in the outdoor stairs shots. In a few, the bride's skin was over processed (too soft). To me, many seem more like snapshots; flash was too direct, harsh shadows behind subjects. Several are difficult to tell exactly what your subject is. You have some good ideas like the Mr. and Mrs signs, I like it. Have you considered getting the flash totally off the camera, as in a few speedlights around the room, bouncing, remotely fired, etc.? Or even an assistant holding a light to upper right frame, etc.?
All in all, I've seen much better stuff from you in the past.