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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by olivertam, Aug 23, 2010.

  1. olivertam

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  2. GotaLuvThosPens

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    Sort of an odd comment here but I find it distracting that she can't get her shoe to sit on the floor because the heels are so extreme.
    other than that though I like the composition/posing. No huge wow factor but still visually pleasing.
     
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    She's not a happy camper.
     
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    A few things here. First off, why is she posed right against - in fact, even touching - a wall? Not just a wall, but a stucco or popcorn wall at that. It's not a good location.

    Second, what mood are you trying to establish here? Yes, I agree with Early that she is not a happy camper; she even appears to be bored, scared or remorseful, depending on which image you look at. I'm questioning the resultant expressions in relation to what was intended, becuase judging from her shoes and pants, it would appear as though the intention was different.

    Third, a compliment on lighting on the second image. If cropped tightly into her face alone, the second photo shows nice balance of light and shadow - just enough to highlight softly, while casting similarly soft shadows to reveal the gentle contour of her face.
     
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    the first 2 are a little odd, the 3rd is pretty decent although slightly oof
     

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