Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Dionysus, Oct 19, 2008.
What's your light source? The first isn't too bad but the inscription is only half in focus. Kind of annoying trying to read it. Narrower aperture = gooder in this situation.
Whatever your light source was (flash or light setup) I would try to diffuse it more so you have a softer shadow. The background seems a bit noisy too and the books seem a bit distracting.
They pictures overall are good though. I like the compostion in the first one and the use of the white rope is great. Nice job.
just natural light and positioning it to get the look i wanted..far from good, but first attempt at manipulating.
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