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  1. Dionysus

    Dionysus TPF Noob!

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    Village Idiot No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    What's your light source? The first isn't too bad but the inscription is only half in focus. Kind of annoying trying to read it. Narrower aperture = gooder in this situation.
     
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    Whatever your light source was (flash or light setup) I would try to diffuse it more so you have a softer shadow. The background seems a bit noisy too and the books seem a bit distracting.

    They pictures overall are good though. I like the compostion in the first one and the use of the white rope is great. Nice job.
     
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    just natural light and positioning it to get the look i wanted..far from good, but first attempt at manipulating.
     

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