Leaf

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  1. JJK1975

    JJK1975 TPF Noob!

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    A stroll through my favorite cemetary. . . .

    I took the shot with my Pentax K1000 and had the film developed at my local Big Box Mart. Unfortunately, my camera settings are lost to the ether.

    I cropped the original--making it skinnier, and trying to move the leaf from the center to something a bit more dynamic.

    I am posting both the color and the black and white versions. I'd love to hear how to make my shots better. Please feel free to edit if the mood takes you.

    Color:

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    Black and white:

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  2. mysteryscribe

    mysteryscribe TPF Noob!

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    From where you are my only suggestion would be to crop both sides equally cut at the same places.
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    Probably isnt any better but it is a little different
     

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