life in a city

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  1. Uselessdreamer1

    Uselessdreamer1 TPF Noob!

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    This is my first try with black and white film. Please tell me what u think!!
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, I like it. I like the contrast between nature and modern architecture, putting the architecture into the background, to the effect - interestingly - that you take a closer look at it, despite the fact that it is blurred! Well done.
     
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    I think the DIF is fine, actuelly, i think it's better this way, it really makes you focus on the branches. With the builing in focus it might have been a little too busy.

    I like it
     
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    LaPhoto's point was that some of the leaves are blurred as well. It's obvious tha the building is meant to be .. and that's a good idea.. but needs a slightly great DOF for the leaves.
     
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    thanks to all of u for the help. i need more if anyone wants to help.
     
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    I love a picture that makes you think. well done
     

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