First try and it doesn't look bad, although I'm not that "wild" about the surreal colours, but that's absolutely personal.
What really bothers me are the very strong converging lines.
In the analog era mostly technical cameras or special lenses - like the PC Nikkor - were used to influence the perspective of buildings etc. (see Scheimpflug principle - Wikipedia), but today this can be done quite well through (digital) editing.
Success!
The converging lines don't bother me at all. It's a successful shot as it is. Nice technical work on straightening the verticals, but I like them both about the same.