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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by nealjpage, Dec 23, 2006.

  1. nealjpage

    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    Actually, I'm not that happy with how this turned out. Let's overlook the whole color thing for the moment (color film seems to freak me out--too many variables) and instead focus on the composition. Is this shot too wide? What would you guys do to this? Oh, and sorry to Chris and Katie for plastering your picture on the internet. It's being done in the name of art :lol:

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    I think it may have worked better (at least for me) if the couple had been shot ahead of the yellow train stoppers on the tracks and maybe they could have been panned while they ran to introduce a little tension through motion, but you may have lost the trains doing that. The yellow things don't work though.:)
     
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    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    Fair enough. I'll have to try this again while home for Christmas. Trains always hang out there, so maybe i'll give it another shot.
     

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