Love ! Would appreciate C&C.

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  1. Pierre-Alexandre

    Pierre-Alexandre TPF Noob!

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    Still learning everyday. Here are some shots I took of my brother and his girlfriend (a good friend of mine). As always, thanks for your time and of course your C&C !

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    this shot is a bit overexposed...
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    ababysean TPF Noob!

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    oh I LOVE the kissing one!

    usually I dont like kissy kissy photos because they always end up with squish nose. Love this angle
     
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    Love and kissing? I think I am going to be sick. Just kidding.
     
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    vtf No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    1. Try a tighter crop, get rid of up to pole. Leave building and bridge, couple. Im really not fond of them walking away at that distance. I dont get any feel for it.
    2, 3, and 4 subject is centered in frame and background has random people in background, crop them out or clone. Maybe try vertical framing next time.
    5. I believe subjects are posed nicely and shot has feeling.
    All are clear and focused. I think its more about framing the shot.
    Not bad, keep it up and looking for more shots from you.
     

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