Miss Nicole

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by agompert, Dec 3, 2009.

  1. agompert

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    I had fun with this shoot

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    I feel like this would look better with a really bright background. Like orange.
    The white just isnt doin it for me.

    I like the pictures tho. The lighting is nice.
     
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    mmm...too many shadows on the wall behind
     
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    Yeah, the shadows on the wall are distracting and in photo 2, the texture of the wall looks sharper than her face. I also wish that cigarette was lit in 2.

    I dunno. I can see that it would have been a really fun shoot. I think that there are just a few things to work on like how you light the backdrop, how far from the backdrop you position the model, and/or your aperture to blur the backdrop (if it has texture like this one does). Also, there's something about the poses/composition that looks a little off to me.

    Even so, it's WAY better than I could do, so take my comments with a grain of salt.
     

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