Discussion in 'People Photography' started by agompert, Dec 3, 2009.
I had fun with this shoot
I feel like this would look better with a really bright background. Like orange.
The white just isnt doin it for me.
I like the pictures tho. The lighting is nice.
mmm...too many shadows on the wall behind
Yeah, the shadows on the wall are distracting and in photo 2, the texture of the wall looks sharper than her face. I also wish that cigarette was lit in 2.
I dunno. I can see that it would have been a really fun shoot. I think that there are just a few things to work on like how you light the backdrop, how far from the backdrop you position the model, and/or your aperture to blur the backdrop (if it has texture like this one does). Also, there's something about the poses/composition that looks a little off to me.
Even so, it's WAY better than I could do, so take my comments with a grain of salt.
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