Mom and sis

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  1. danalec99

    danalec99 TPF Noob!

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    This is the uncropped version.
    Would like to hear your opinions on how to handle a shot like this - angle, crop, contrast etc.

    Thrash me :)
     
  2. Alison

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    Hmmm...I think the faces on the people need a little lighting. The woman in the foreground's hair blends in with the cabinets which I find distracting. If it was me, I would have stood between the table and the trash can to get more of a feeling between the two women. It seems like there is a story there, but it's competing with all the objects in the room.
     
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    -I see the need for lighting on their faces.
    -Wanted to include the widow in the frame too.
    -re. the 'hair blending' situation, it looks fine on my monitor!

    Thanks for the input Alison.
     
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    Thats a good suggestion for another frame!

    Thanks :)
     

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