More Manhattan Beach Volleyball!

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  1. the changoman

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    Hey everyone, I need help with my Volley Ball Galleries, I just posted a new one (work in progress), and It seems to me that the pictures I'm taking are starting to seem repetative. Is there a remedy to this? How can I vary my angles or position myself to get different shots?

    In bad need of some Comments and Critique. (still learning):)

    Look at the gallery here --> http://laphotog.zenfolio.com/

    Thanks for looking!

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    Good work. Mid day sun is a pain. I like these. That being said:

    Of the three The first is has the most power I think.

    #2 something in the model's face is distracting. Either shadows or expression

    #3 And the midrif shadows bug me on this one.
     
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    sounds good.:)
     
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    nice shots
     
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    thanks :wink:
     
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    the first one is a keeper!!
    iwould crop the second and third by half. Eyes + Ball = Goal ;)
     
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    looks good. What I'm missing is defense pics or photo's where people are setting the ball. I know the attack looks like the most fascinating part of the game, but a good dig is great too. There are a few in your gallery where the ball is missing; that's weird when you see someone jump and hit air.

    Try some closer shots too: hand touching the ball, a look on someones face, things like that.


    but for a volleyball addict like me, this is a great start. If I were there, I would have probably ordered some. Keep it up!


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    thank you very much... and yes, I am addicted also.;)
     
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    Bring the image up closer, an image worth running is worth running BIG:wink:
     

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