My Hallway Flowers

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  1. Replic

    Replic TPF Noob!

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    Here's a shot I did in my hallway on my Fuji Finepix S7000 - after some massive GIMPing this is what came out. Thoughts and opinions?

    Oh, and I'm sorry bout the crappy quality- once again, if you want to see a high quality version, AIM me at HlfShell or e-mail me.

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    It's difficult for me to find a b&w picture of flowers interresting. I also find the shadow distracting
     
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    I'm a beginner so take this for what it's worth, but I think I'd like this more if I could see the whole vase. I prefer color pictures, but since all the flowers are different I think the black and white can work.

    Nice flower arrangement by the way. :)
     
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    To my eyes it needed portrait, flowers in the middle, full visibility of the vase. OR - really close in on the flowers, narrow DOF, no vase. I don't find the shadow too distracting as it adds depth to something which otherwise would look like it's been cut 'n' pasted onto a white background
     

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