My Inspiration

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Monica Fermin, Jul 25, 2008.

  1. Monica Fermin

    Monica Fermin TPF Noob!

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    Please meet Logan and Bailee....

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  2. Monica Fermin

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    any c&c on these shots?
     
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    Ahhh, now there's the trick. You have to ask for it before you get it! ;)

    C&C per req:

    1. Nice image, well composed and exposed. Only two very minor comments are that I would like to see a little more catchlight in his eyes, and I think the wall behind him could be about 1/2 stop darker.

    2. This one doesn't work for me. While (especially with children) you don't always want the subject looking into the camera, looking towards it is good. As well, the shadow on the right side of his face is a detractor; a reflector would have evened this up and helped the image greatly. Also pay attention to your background; the pactch of random greenery behind his head is less than pleasing.

    3. Very nicely done; again just a tad darker on the wall behind, and maybe a slightly less tight crop image left so as not to cut off her right arm.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

    ~John
     
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    John, thank you for taking the time! I really appreciate your c&c :D

    Monica
     

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