My latest effort... C&C Welcome...

BuS_RiDeR · Apr 21, 2013

Model: LeeAnn Dussault
Setup: Canon 50D, Canon EFs 17-85mm IS USM lens, Single 400 watt-second mono-light (about half power)

cgipson1 · Apr 21, 2013

Hey Bus! I like it.. but I do think a bit more DOF was needed, the far eye looks OOF! The contrast between the highlights on her face / shadow on her back may be a bit extreme for some also. Also have some neck folds... need to get them to lift that head up.

The_Traveler · Apr 21, 2013

^ what he said.

This is super duper nicely sharp.
My only comments are the placement in the center gives strange emphasis to the back and I think it's a bit on the cold side.

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The_Traveler · Apr 21, 2013

^ what he said.

This is super duper nicely sharp.
My only comments are the placement in the center gives strange emphasis to the back and I think it's a bit on the cold side.

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BuS_RiDeR · Apr 21, 2013

Thanks for the input guys. I appreciate it.

tirediron · Apr 21, 2013

One very small niggle, in addition to the points above (Points so good Lew had to make them twice!

) I would suggest cloning out the little bit of hair protruding below her nose. At a quick glance it looks like she has rather excessively long nostril hair.

BuS_RiDeR · Apr 23, 2013

tirediron said:
One very small niggle, in addition to the points above (Points so good Lew had to make them twice! ) I would suggest cloning out the little bit of hair protruding below her nose. At a quick glance it looks like she has rather excessively long nostril hair.

I completely missed that until you pointed it out. Thanks...