New Portrait, C&C please

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by CBRfanatic, May 17, 2007.

  1. CBRfanatic

    CBRfanatic TPF Noob!

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    This is my first portrait posted for C&C. I took it over the weekend. It wasnt posed, i just came around the corner and she turned and smiled at me and....*snap*, got her. what do you guys think?
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    CBRfanatic TPF Noob!

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    bunch of views, no comments.....?
    *bump*
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think your description of "The Making of This Photo" shows that it should be in People and Pets, much rather than in Portraits and Weddings - this is more where the pro-photogs meet who make money with their taking other people's portraits.
    So I shall move it.

    It is nice - being totally candid and unplanned. I like the soft light on her face and the many catchlights in her eyes (others don't like those many catchlights, I know, but I do, makes them sparkle).
     
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    Nice composition! I like how she's leaning into the frame. It looks under exposed by a stop or two though. To fix in post processing, I would do a screen layer at about 70 percent :)
     

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