Great idea, nice composition. Only small problem I dislike is the uneveness in the lighting. Maybe a second soft light from the right just to brighten the shadows a little.
ya I was thinking that too in a way. I did some photoshop work on the shadow but i like the funky lighting because to me it goes with the oldskool kind of idea and how its just more free form, Thanks for the critique and comments
Here is another one I took from a different angle. Is this better or same c&c? I like the uneven lighting because it makes it more unatural I didnt want to do a product shoot.