Outdoor portrait.

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  1. anubis404

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    I've never really done portraits, I do mostly landscapes. Is this any good?
     
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    Her eyes really pull me in. Seems you were using some off camera lighting or a really close reflector? I am sure there are ways to nit pick, but I think over all its a strong shot. I do not like the crop though. Too many lost joins and fingers. I think you could go for an really interesting crop because they eyes really pull attention
     
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    I like everything but the pose (looks very unnatural) and the crop. Nice light. - TF
     
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    Lol, the light was actually just my SB-600 on camera with the wide angle thingy used as a bounce card.

    As for the pose, what aspect of it is unnatural?
     
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    Her arms look unnatural to me. - TF
     
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    The pose seems a little too mature for her and I don't like the crop. Otherwise it's very nice.
     
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    Great shot!....Perhaps crop it a bit tighter to eliminate the forearms and fingers.

    Dave
     
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    The pose look unnatural.
     
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    I dont mind the pose so much. She is totally at the hannah montana age :)
     
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    Lol I guess so.
     

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