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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by phoenicorn, Jul 9, 2009.

  1. phoenicorn

    phoenicorn TPF Noob!

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    Hi all I'm Christian Sparrow and I am looking for some pointers on improving my technique.

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    I will post more soon. Thanks for your time.
     
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  2. Dylan-Fishman

    Dylan-Fishman TPF Noob!

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    Nice colors and all but I don't really know what I should look at? It's a nice picture but I see a few things you could work on. What camera are you using?
    What you could work on

    PP (post processing)- If you have photoshop, use it. Your clouds look a little soft and so does the whole picture.

    You're a tad out of focus.

    Have a focal point and guess what??? Focus on it! Landscape like this doesn't *need* a focal point but It should have something that pops.
    What's good!

    You used the rule of thirds nicely.

    The picture has great colors

    Maybe something like this?
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    All I did was adjust some colors and contrast
     
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  3. Dylan-Fishman

    Dylan-Fishman TPF Noob!

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    So you added another one.

    This picture would be very good if you play with it in photoshop or gimp. Boost some colors and get that constrast up a wee bit.
     
  4. phoenicorn

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    Made some mods like you suggested

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