Please critique this shot =)

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by willma88, Jul 20, 2009.

  1. willma88

    willma88 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 20, 2009
    Messages:
    69
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Sydney Australia
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I took this at the NSW art gallery in Australia. Your comments please? Thankyou

    [​IMG]
     
  2. PhotoXopher

    PhotoXopher TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 27, 2009
    Messages:
    3,475
    Likes Received:
    2
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I like it.... composition, exposure, everything – looks great!
     
  3. Yemme

    Yemme No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Apr 30, 2008
    Messages:
    2,654
    Likes Received:
    13
    Location:
    NY
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I second that... Did you get any close ups?
     
  4. AdamBomb

    AdamBomb TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 14, 2008
    Messages:
    200
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Ann Arbor, MI
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Awesome shot but you wanted some critiquing so I would have to say I would have liked to see the frame moved to the left just a little bit to balance the pillars, or more-so their bases.

    Does that make sense?
     
  5. willma88

    willma88 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 20, 2009
    Messages:
    69
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Sydney Australia
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Yep, that defs does! I guess thats something i need to work on, being a little more on top of things when it comes to framing.

    Cheers mate
     
  6. willma88

    willma88 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 20, 2009
    Messages:
    69
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Sydney Australia
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I did not get any closeup, maybe next time. The lady at the museum didnt like poeple taking photos.... :S
     
  7. mylo

    mylo TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 25, 2008
    Messages:
    237
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    It's one BEAUTIFUL shot! I LOVE the arc shaped dome with repeated motifs and the lighting in the picture. Are those natural light?
     
  8. willma88

    willma88 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 20, 2009
    Messages:
    69
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Sydney Australia
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Thanks mate, No its not natural light, there was a spotlight thing behind me which lit up the dome areas. It was actually rather dim.
     
  9. Bravotwofive

    Bravotwofive TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 18, 2009
    Messages:
    55
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Kansas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think it works well. In the absence of a tilt shift lens for the pilars I think the dome composition makes it very nice.
    Good work.

    Chuck
     

Share This Page