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  1. his4ever

    his4ever TPF Noob!

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    I was going for lines here. Is this even interesting at all? Or was this just a good try? Any other thoughts?
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    I was having a little fun with this one... but still... what could have made it better? I did take some different angles (or at least one other angle... streight on, but it did not seem as neat as this one). Did I crop it too tight? Is this intersting at all? Thanks for your thoughts.
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    not even a good try.... haha, kidding, the second one is decent but boring, i like the second one though. i wish that air conditioner wasnt in it though
     
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    The first one is pretty boring. The second one i feel like is too dark and the building get too close to the end of the picture on the far left.
     
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    I began to have the same feelings about the air conditioner as well... figured I would just post these to see what people would say. Thanks so much for your coments. :D
     

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