Prisoner

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  1. cillie

    cillie TPF Noob!

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    Went to the zoo today...........

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    Take a moment and look at his eyes.


    I would appreciate your comments on this one.
     
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    I like it, but it's a bit too soft IMO. Maybe some contrast.
     
  3. Artemis

    Artemis Just Punked Himself

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    I really like this one, and love the expression on the monkeys face!
     
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    Captivating photo!!! I really see the sadness in his eyes. Good camera work.

    I should not go on about my views of Zoo's and captivity. I am fully bummed that he looks so sad. Spill some details of this critter and your zoo experience.
     
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    lovely photo,maybe darken the edges so the focus is more on his eyes?.Good photo though.
     
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    I agree that its too soft and can use some contrast. The image itself is great though.
     
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    Remarkable capture of emotion. I dont see how sharper focus would help.(IMO)


    I would show this photo to my wife, but it would break her down in a heartbeat.
     
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    great framing! tad bit of camera shake, but that can be hard to avoid. i'd like to see a bit more contrast...that would really give it a nice punch. nice capture!
     
  9. cillie

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    Thanks guys, I'll play a bit more with the photo PS. I agree more contrast might just do the trick.
     
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    Great expression! I like it as is.
     
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