Railroad Theme- CC

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by DavidR, Oct 22, 2009.

  1. DavidR

    DavidR TPF Noob!

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    Looking for some CC on these two railroad theme photos.

    Im a Photography student just starting out, this is my first semester and prior to this i had never shot anything but snapshots, but i would really like to continue in this feild so any CC would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

    There has been no PP done to these since im still saving for a nice computer and software...starving student and all i was lucky to scrounge together just enough for the camera.

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome!

    C&C per req:

    1. Technically this image is fine, except perhaps for the deep shadow cast by the top of the rail). Artistically, I see where you were going here (I think) but the result isn't doing a lot for me. I have to admit though, that I'm not sure what could be done to improve it.

    2. The highlights on the upper portion of the image are a little bright, and cound stand to be knocked back maybe 1/3 of a stop or so. I think this one might have been a little better from a compositional standpoint had you been look squarely at the brake wheel...

    Just my $00.02 worth; your mileage may vary.

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  3. DavidR

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    Thanks tirediron thats what im looking for.
     

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