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  1. klissarov ik

    klissarov ik TPF Noob!

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    taken with a p&s camera last year

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    Why are rappers always worried about people slitting their throats?

    Do you have a higher resolution image?
     
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    also have it this way, but i think the first one is better isn't?

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    Processing is pretty good, but I think it would be better were there at least some detail in his jacket.

    I'm not a fan of the blurring.
     
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    oh and there was this one also, forgot to add it.

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    I think that you're blocking up your shadows too much in processing. You're missing a couple zones.
     
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    i like the DOF effect you've used, but you have also used it on the edges of the subject, it would look much better if the edges of him were sharp and just the background blurred.
     

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