Rebecca again!!!

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  1. Alyssajns24

    Alyssajns24 TPF Noob!

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    All comments welcomed!!

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  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I really like the perspective, lighting, skin tones & especially the model. Wonderful.

    What I don't like is the copyright (right on the model) and the cropping. Her hand, elbow & knee are all cut off. The hand & elbow don't bother me as much as the knee though. If the crop was a little higher at the top, I think this would be a much stronger photo.
     
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    These are photos on my website that is why the copyright info is on it...
     
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    dude, you're driving me crazy with this girl! :fangs:
     
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    :lol: HA HA HA HA...She is very pretty...And BTW I am not a dude :wink: I am a girl!!!LOL
     
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    oops! my bad...sorry, :oops:
     
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    :LOL: foot in mouth ;)

    These are definately your best shots yet :thumbsup: You've improved quite a bit since you first started working with this model. The first one is beautiful. Both poses are very flattering for this model.
     
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    D'oh!! :lol: Don't worry Jon...I thought the same thing a while back until I visited her site...Aly these are really great- keep it up!!!! The white enviros are perfect...her skin tones against it, beautiful!!!...very victoria's secret like. The angles you've been using on these last few are very professional looking.
     
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    She has amazing eyes. Although it appears to me she has a tricky nose - for some reason it just doesn't like the light. The second shot is much better for that but then the light bounced off her leg. All I can think is that your lights are too bright. Down them a smidge. Oh, and by the way, you really have come 50,000 miles with these shots. Great work.
     
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    You're a talented studio photographer. You have great control of the elements that comprise a great portrait. Your work with Rebecca is some of the more professional-looking submissions I've seen on the forum
     
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    I really like these two. However on the bottom photo I just can't get over the bumps on her butt that must be just a hint of her toes showing. I don't know about everyone else but it really grabs my attention. I would PS them out.

    Great work!

    Eric
     
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    Good work I love people photos.
     

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