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Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by Steel26, Apr 22, 2009.

  1. Steel26

    Steel26 TPF Noob!

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    All comments appreciated.

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    As you can tell not all of these are "professional" but I am too lazy to make another post in the people gallery for the ones that aren't.

    -Sam
     
  2. Primo

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    All the photos are pretty decent, but just a personal dislike of mine is using a low f-stop in a black and white photo, the out of focus areas create an ugly blur.
    (really noticable in picture number two on the back right sholder)
     
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    some good shots in this series, but all could use some pp work to boost contrast, color and pop ;)
     
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    BuZzZeRkEr TPF Noob!

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    I think you did a great job with capturing the subject. I feel you captured the essence of the subject...like I know a little something about all of them just by their picture. The technical aspects need a little help...particularly in lighting, and a little PP. Keep it up
     
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    nice, good job![​IMG]
     
  6. Lyncca

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    The expressions aren't bad, but I find the lighting really distracting in almost all of them. Its really harsh or not contrasty (yes thats a new word) enough to me. Some post processing would help in some I believe :)
     
  7. Steel26

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    Hey. Thanks for all the input. Would anyone mind doing some pp so I can see exactly what they mean?
     
  8. Lyncca

    Lyncca TPF Noob!

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    Here ya go. I did some curves adjustment, skin softening, eye enhancement, burn on some of the hair to add some detail, brushed up under his right eye a bit and did a highpass filter.

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  9. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    And I'm too busy to tackle 11 critiques at once. If you'd really like in-depth critiques on images, I suggest a separate post for each.

    Keep 'em coming, Sam; just not soooo many of different sessions at once.

    -Pete
     

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