Rust

[matseski]

I saw some photographs at a local art show and thought, 'These are awesome, I think I can do that' so I gave it a try...

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I dont really like the DoF on the last, but I really liked the greens and oranges so I posted it anyways.

C&C always welcome.

Thanks for looking!

 

[EIngerson]

Nice!

 

[KenC]

Rust is always an interesting subject. These are not bad - they have good texture and color, and the sharpness is good - it's easy to have a little camera tilt and have one side or corner go soft, but these seem good. However, I don't think the compositions are all that interesting. One challenge with abstracts is to frame an area that works as a composition. These all seem just a little unbalanced to me. Keep shooting!